6Traits Digest #120 - Friday, January 7, 2000 Re: 6Traits-Books for word choice (older kids) byRe: 6Traits-Books for word choice (older kids) by "Susan Nixon" <susan@desertskyone.com> Expository writing by "Susan Nixon" <susan@desertskyone.com> Re: 6Traits- Expository writing by Re: 6Traits- Expository writing by "Kristine Peterson" ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Subject: Re: 6Traits-Books for word choice (older kids) From: Date: Fri, 7 Jan 2000 20:39:01 EST I've been reading Harris and Me by Gary Paulsen aloud to my kids (8th graders). His word choice is wonderful. The kids are starting to comment = as I'm reading to them. They have also noticed work choice in The Giver- one = of the premises of the community is precision of language. Diane Buchanan ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Subject: Re: 6Traits-Books for word choice (older kids) From: "Susan Nixon" <susan@desertskyone.com> Date: Sat, 08 Jan 2000 19:02:55 -0700 Diane, Thanks for those ideas! I like _The Giver_ myself. Isn't it exciting = when they start to catch on to some of these things? I don't think they can really understand how to use the traits until they can identify them in others' writing. That's really the job of K-2 teachers, to lay a nice solid foundation. The first few years, it has to be difficult until students begin to come along who have the background. That's when I expect to see things take off! Has anyone used _Donovan's Word Jar_? It's in the February Trumpet and I heard something about it, but didn't pay any attention. The description makes it sound as though it would be great for word choice, though. If = you know anything about it, let us know. Susan Nixon 2nd grade Phoenix, AZ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Subject: Expository writing From: "Susan Nixon" <susan@desertskyone.com> Date: Sat, 08 Jan 2000 19:00:50 -0700 Did I share, and if I didn't, would you be interested in having me share, seven ways to begin an expository piece? It was probably designed for older students, but it worked *extremely* well with my 2nd graders - given the fact of slightly lower expectations, of course. =3D) I shared it with someone, but I don't think it was the 6Traits list. Susan Nixon 2nd grade Phoenix, AZ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Subject: Re: 6Traits- Expository writing From: Date: Fri, 7 Jan 2000 22:04:59 EST Share anything your little heart desires, susan! Still learning from this = summer. Ann/Maryland/5th ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Subject: Re: 6Traits- Expository writing From: "Kristine Peterson" Date: Fri, 07 Jan 2000 20:14:45 -0700 Susan, Thanks for sharing your ideas on expository writing. We are now in the midst of the 6-traits assessments. Thanks ahead of time. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- End of 6Traits Digest -- To unsubscribe, send any message at all to: 6Traits-off@. Archive of past digests is at: http://6Traits.Cyberspaces.net/archive/?_NO_DATETIME